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ifyouletitflowwiththesea；somedayyourwishwilletrue〃

flowalong；littleglassbottle

withamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere；itquietlydisappears

youalwaysdideverythingformysakeallthatiwanted；andyet

iwasalwayssoselfishandtroublesometoyou

you；whograntsmywishesarenolongerherewillmythoughts；onthisseaarriveattheirdestination

flowalong；littlewishtearsandregretwhenirealizedmysinsitwasalwaysaftereverythingwasalreadyoverflowalong；littleglassbottlewithamessagecontainingawishontheothersideofthehorizonthere；itquietlydisappearsflowalong；littlewishtearsandregret〃ifweweretoberebo〃

罗马音折叠machihazurenochiisanaminatohitoritadatsumishoujokonouminimukashikaraaruhisokanaitsutae（nekaiwoikaitayouhishiwokobinniireteumininagasebaitsunohikaomoiwaminorudeshou）nagareteikugarasunokobinnegaiwokometamesse^jisuihesennokanatanishizukanikieteikukimiwaitsumowatashinotameninandemo**ekuretanoniwatashiwaitsumowagamamabakarikimiwokomarasetetanegaiwokanaetekurerukimimouinaikarakonouminiwatashinoomoitodoketemoraunonagareteikuchiisanarekaminamidatosukoshinorigurettotsuminikidukunowaitsumosubetewattaahonagareteikugarasunokobinnegaiwokometamesse^jisuihekonnokanatanishizukanikieteikunagareteikuchiisanarekaninamidatosukoshinorigurettomoshimoumarekawarerunaraba＇，！＇

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其实说真的，我不喜欢特别犀利直接的指出我的错误，但是我还是希望在改文的时候能有比较直接的，所以评论的话只要说出我的不足就可以了，至于回访什么的说一下就行了。

这本书的风格是和同学打赌的，所以自己本来只是想融合很多我自己看过的所有小说的风格，再写这个的，但是朋友死活要求我要试一试